God is always opposite...

every time when i pray to god
i always say
''Oh god please give me strength
enough to fight with the worries
and enough to carry the burden

please give me intelligence
that i may understand the situation
and understand the enemy

please give me happiness and health
by which i could live with ''

but the god always goes opposite
when i ask him for strength
he makes me weak
that much weak that
like an ivy vine
i fall on ground without support
and strength that i could stand

when i ask god for intelligence
he always gives me
the power to feel
and the feeling is work of heart
and feelings are so powerful
that are of just of love against someone
 that i cant understand anything

when i ask the god for happiness
he always filled my way
with the thorns of sorrow...

Reviews

[Mirra]

Other than the words that should have been capitalize this poem is well written. If God didn't give what you wished for then there is a reason, maybe it's not the time yet or maybe something is better for you. God is always there for us so don't stop praying, he always listen to every prayer ^_^

[vaishnavi]

i know God always do but in some case God don't... thank you for this review

[Mirra]

You are welcome ^_^

[Emily]

Oh I love this poem! Well done!

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much Emily :D

[Saddam]

No dear. GOD always do, whatever do, it is for your best. It is only a way of understand. But poetry, an outstanding lines. I feel it so but soon I try to find what is going on.....

[vaishnavi]

everyone has different way of thinking its just that u believe in the way out of not...
thank for reading :D

[yuki]

even I get this sometimes but its just a matter of waiting.very wll done

[vaishnavi]

thank you yuki :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think we all feel this way sometimes.Praying and wondering why god doesn't listen to us but he does in time everything works out.You penned this so very well Vaish :)

[vaishnavi]

thank you so much vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)