light

light

A Poem by vaishnavi

light is bright
everyone needs light
but if too much of it,it will make your eyes to close
never let your light die
and never let your darkness spread
live in light...

© 2014 vaishnavi


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I love the way you used the words with the proper verbs which hold the rhythmic flow. Nice poem, it's a shorty piece but I just love this one. Good one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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