*I'll leave*

I feel like a LOSER..
Every time you WALK over...
It takes my HEART away..
To know I was so LAME...

TEARS roll down my cheek..
As I walk over the STREET...
It's so hard to be SOMEONE..
YOU never wanted to be...

I am so SURPRISED..
To see nothing is ALRIGHT...
If I can fix it all which went WRONG..
Believe me I would have PLEAD...
Even if that means I have to LEAVE...

Author's Note

just a random poem..:) ^_^

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good random poem. I like how you strengthen certain words with color. A very good flow of words in this poem. Sometime we can't be what someone want us to be. If someone want you to be different. Why did they want to be with you at the beginning? A strong ending to the poem.
Coyote

[Bhavya Kaushik]

That was very sad :( I could feel your anger in your words!

[Just Plain Me]

I find random poems are usually best :) They tend to be just random emotions you have in you somewhere...or at least they are for me... lol Anyway! It was awesome :) I loved the word choice and the meaning of the poem :)

[Sakib]

An interesting poem. The changing of colors to distinguish the words is really nice. A pleasant read.

[misha]

This is interesting. Great poem

[jay verma]

short and sweet and like the 2nd stanza... this is very nice,, n i think it may be some more better,,,, but overall this is very good..

[stars are far]

this is so nice
i loved that :))

[Akshat♥]

random but nice:)
short,sweet poem..nice try
leaving is never easy..but sometimes
we have no choice..

[Kelley]

Very sad but who ever heard of a happy poet right. I did like
what you had to say. Sometimes people never catch the hint do they.

[LonelySoul]

walking away from your problems will never solve them,only delay the inevitable.