A walk in rain...

Walking in the rain
A pleasure of pain...
Heart held in vain
Crying in the rain…

Author's Note

:) :)

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

I love walking in rain..smell is also good.
but everything is a waste when you have something weird
going on..crying in rain hides your feelings but your inside
is in real pain..So emotional..keep writing!!

[Big ol' Kahuna]

I liked this one. I have felt this way many times and it really makes the reader think about it and how it relates to them.

Good job.

[barricade]

Great work...deeply heart felt and moving...the pleasure of the pain, the heart held in vain!
painful...yet beautiful...

keep it up!

[red_saphyre]

this was good i sensed hidden meaning in it i like it

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was so painful and tragic :(

[Nish Nish the Fish]

this was very interesting,
simple yet very thought provoking.
Pleasurable Pain? thats gonna be on my mind for a while..
you could feel the intensity of your emotions but its so "cool" that you formatted ur thoughts in such simplicity.
well dont ;)

[Lyra H]

You know, I'm not one for short poems, but I really like this!

[ScorpioPoet]

short...to the point.....you could really feel the emotion in this...great job! :)

[LlamaLord]

Very meaningful. A lot of hidden meaning I assume was put into this poem. Great work :)

-Austin

[LonelySoul]

walks in the rain only hides the tears you wish for nobody to see,
while your writing shows us those tears,good work...