love you mom

I love you for all the times you made me smile...
I sorry for the times I hurted you pride...
Time move from good to bad...
But you always made me glad...
You were there to cheer my bad...
You never expected anything
But for me you sacrificed many things...
Your princess is no smaller and I know you soul...
I will fight I will stand up your needs and you feel your princess heal...

Author's Note

:):)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Every words said in praise of that dear person,they will not be enough
i just like writes like this..
I love you all the times..sorry at time i did hurt your pride..times were good and bad
but you were so strong always made it feel like it was never that bad
you will ask for nothing.you only give and give endlessly..
your sacrifices will just amaze me at all times..
lovely write..

[red_saphyre]

i really like this... you are so much like me that every thing you write mans something to me....

i espaciallt liked this line:
I sorry for the times I hurted you pride...

you are a really good writer keep it vaishali

[deeps]

This is so beuatiful and ever so heartfelt i like this well written

[Kelley]

great poem for you mum.
I bet she will love it.


thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Alice Oiseau]

Note it should be "you were" not "you was"
Good poem. A lovely tribute to the wonderful woman who has raised who and helped make you who you are today.
Cheers.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! That was beautiful...so heart touching and exceptionally beautiful and raw!

[Anita B Jacques]

Thank you for sharing this honest and heartfelt poem. The flow is perfect and connecting. A sweet and moving write.God Bless.
Hugs and friendship
Annie

[barricade]

this is beautiful! so pure! and such a lovely tribute!!! a sweet gesture for the one who has done so much without asking anything in return...loved unconditionally...faced the world, fought for us...protecting us...

"You was there to cheer my bad...
You never expected anything
But for me you sacrificed many things..."

the sacrifices they make, the love they shower...a friend, a philosopher and a true guide...
i loved it! keep it up!


regards
barricade...

[Just Plain Me]

This is really sweet :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Beautifully written with emotions straight from the heart.... there is nothing on this planet like a mother.. through good and bad.. my mother and I had very rough past times.. but today we are sooo very close.. love her so much!!! Thank you for sharing this truly supreme writing!!! =)