love you mom

I love you for all the times you made me smile...
I sorry for the times I hurted you pride...
Time move from good to bad...
But you always made me glad...
You were there to cheer my bad...
You never expected anything
But for me you sacrificed many things...
Your princess is no smaller and I know you soul...
I will fight I will stand up your needs and you feel your princess heal...

Author's Note

:):)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Every words said in praise of that dear person,they will not be enough
i just like writes like this..
I love you all the times..sorry at time i did hurt your pride..times were good and bad
but you were so strong always made it feel like it was never that bad
you will ask for nothing.you only give and give endlessly..
your sacrifices will just amaze me at all times..
lovely write..

[QuietPoet]

Very true. Moms are such a wonderful gift to us. Especially around this time when we have Mother's Day coming. Make sure to give your mom a big hug and a kiss. =)

[17thWhitePrince]

Awe ... Very Nicely Written Indeed !!!
Really Really Good !!!

[Linda Stinson]

Better late than never. Sorry about taking so long to read your poem. Been tied up doing crappy stuff.

"I sorry for the time I hurted your pride." Seems like something is missing....or is it my brain cells??? That is always a possiblity...lol "and I know you soul" (tense) also "I will fight I will stand up" maybe a ; or a ,. That is just my suggestion, other than that, it is a lovely poem that brings praise to the mama. She is so proud of you, I can tell by how you honor her. Even in the bad times.

Love the pic too, it was perfect for the poem.

[Akash]

A mother --- and the line ends with love.
Such a depiction sounds all around the world.
Winter words -- very good write.

Nice
-akash-

[John J. Smiley]

This is such a cool line, "You were there to cheer my bad." Great! Thanks

[Winter McPherson]

YES!! I couldn't agree more! My mother is a tower of strength for me. Her love has gotten me through my darkness times and she has always loved me and stood by me. She is a constant reminder of God's love for me......thank you for this simply beautiful tribute to your mother! Wonderful!

[LonelySoul]

nothing says Love like a mother's hugs

[Honeypot]

I bet your mom loved this. Wonderful job! Its very sweet and thoughtful of you to write this poem.

[Big ol' Kahuna]

Beautiful feelings here. No better way of making a parent feel good than words such as these. Very Nice!

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

Such a sweet write for the most wonderful person in this world.:)
I cant say anything more than this....coz any number of words will fall short of this one person...."MOTHER"
I love it.:)