YOU...!!

the way i do..
the way i flew..
what ever i do...
leads me to you..

Author's Note

this one just suddenly came into my mind...!!^_^

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

this is short, simple, & strait to the point. i love it. when you love someone, your thoughts, your dreams your life always involve them, always lead back to that person/place. i also really love the line "the way i flew" for some reason, it is very whimsical, and i can see how it relates to life, & i really think for me, it MAKES this poem. an amazing write.

[LonelySoul]

you...but why..where did your little bird fly?
you...but how...who should we love now?
you...nice little poem...but when...may we take this one home?
I've always liked the short and sweet poems,and this one fits both.good work d:?)

[barricade]

short and sweet yes...but oh so powerful and strong...simple and subtle yet leaving an impression...very well done!!!

regards
barricade..

[poetic soul]

wow!! this is amazing!! :) awesome lines......such love is really hard to find...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Ralphy]

Wow, that's really sweet, I am at a loss. Wonderfully written and great phrasing....

When I say the title "You" I thought to myself, wow, this is going to be a long poem, how could it not be, then I starting reading and it was over �and I thought, wow, I felt like I just read a book. Great work
Vaishai

[Kelley]

awww how sweet.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh my god! What a beautiful Jorio!
It's very hard to write a Jorio, but you did it so effortlessly!
This is so awesome!!
Short but yet so sweet and thoughtful...Great work :)

[17thWhitePrince]

hahaha how nice of it just to suddenly come into your mind hahaha
very nice
short
simple
sweet
to the point
beautiful
very very good indeed

[Awake.&.Unafraid]

I like it, it's short and cute and it sticks in your head :)

[Anita B Jacques]

I like it, short but well done, keep them flowing. Thank you for sharing with me. God Bless
Hugs

[Katherine Wyatt]

Beautiful!