SiLeNt TeAr

 

 

 

 

Days passed by and my tear became so rare

But no one knows every night I still cry a silent tear

Inside my heart flows a ocean of emotions of my unfulfilled dreams

I live in the world of my loneliness...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is the one very close to my heart...!
as no one forgets there pain they only get used to it...!this is something related to that...!

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

everyone pass through these moments..
but i want to ask what is it you want to be fulfilled..every body has dreams
i have always known that running after life,so we will get out of her all we wish for
its a rat race,it does not deserve the trouble ,i have dreams too ,but i dont follow them
yes i dream but i live my life,if they come true so be it ,if not its just you are not that lucky
thats how life works,thats how i always knew her to be..
i will never shed a tear for unfulfilled dreams for i think my dreams are fulfilled
once i have them in my mind.......
lovely write..

[Encore]

"Inside my heart flows a ocean of emotions of my unfulfilled dreams"

Very true and powerful. Kudos to you, my friend!

[red_saphyre]

this is really well written, i can kinda relate to the silent tear b/c i dont let any one see me cry....

[QuietPoet]

I can relate to this very much. It was sad and very deep.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Sad, but beautiful. Well Penned.

[Victoria Harlequin]

I can relate to this. And that makes the poem so much more enjoyable. Yes it's sad, but I didn't feel that way reading it. This is very good, nice write.

[Akash]

Heartbreaking and very sad.
I empathize completely with the sadness and flow of this piece.
Its eerie how pain can corner us to give the best of all.

Perfection
-akash-

[Honeypot]

This is beautiful. Its so sad and resigned almost. I often think that shorter poems pack more of a punch and I think this one did just that.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

i really like it...you did a wonderful job on it...lots of people have dreams...some come true others dont...and sometimes we feel lost and alone...but there is always someone there...and there is always someone that cares even if we dont realize...and it is God that is always there no matter what.
Great Job :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was so painful, short but very strong~

[poetic-raven2012]

i love how even though this is short, it is so heartfelt and touching
wonderful write
oh- and i love your use of pics