i love you dad

i love you dad

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 

I love you dad...

For all the times you stand beside...

For all the times you made me smile...


I love you...
For being there at my side...
For being there at my pride...

I love you..
For all the sacrifice you made for my smile
For all the pain you took by my side...

I love you...
For making me what I’m today...
For encouraging me to be me...

I love you..
For the troubles you took for my leisure
For the strive you did for my desires

I love you..
For being polite even after my disgrace
For being there even after my mistakes

I love you 
For all you did for me...
For all you will be doing for me...
 
I love you dad 
Your princess will stand up for your needs
And make you feel at ease
 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
this one is dedicated to my dad...he was always there with me...!as i been through many problems but he was always standing by my side...!
as we come to know he value of a person when he is only the one standing by our side no matters what...in good and bad situation....
and i think many can relate to this...!!
and i just wanna say i love you dad...this one for you....thanks for being always there for me...!

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I just love reviewing such personal pieces of writing.. why? Because they are genuine and straight from the heart!!! You made my day.. this one is so touching.. you definitely should consider maybe framing this one and giving it to your father for father's day or a birthday maybe.. I've written for members of my family and there is so much personality and passion in each piece! Thank you for sharing this...there is no love like that of a Dad!!! sincerely.. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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There are no other true words other than what you have written. Cherish that dad and love him with all you have. Many may come across one's path in a lifetime claiming to fill the shoes, but there is only one.
You wrote a good piece of work here, flows smooth with the deep words. It is hard to put into words into feelings when they overwhelm you and the choice is few, if not then this would be a book, right?
I think you made Dad very proud. And the pics only added exhilaration to the piece. Good job


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a gorgeous tribute to your dad. very beautiful. parents should be loved & adored & appreciated like this. although my father was not a good father the first 18 years of my life, we both have changed, & now are very close. i loved the lines: "For all you did for me...For all you will be doing for me..." great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good job. I am a Dad and I hope my kids will have that feeling for me.

You should definetly give it to him as I am sure he would love to hear your words. As a father nothing is more precious to you than your kid's love. Having a child changes everything.

Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was entirely sweet.. made me wish that I had that sort of loving relationship with my own dad. It's really nice to read something as thoughtful as this, and know that daughters can still have wonderful relationships with their fathers. Very endearing and touching. Nice piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thats really wonderful..
parent are some people that we should appreciate,their sacrifices ,all the troubles the went through to bring their children to the best way they could ,
they are always there when you take a fall ,when you are in need,they feel your pain,and ready to give themselves so you live happy and good
they will stay late up at night to make sure that you sleep sound and calm..
they will do anything to make you as successful as they could,they deserve that we appreciate what trouble they take
to bring the best in us..
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i loved this and yo got me to tears... i m missing my daddy....... (i stay away from home).....lovely......daddy's little princess must be making daddy proud of her!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:')
So sweet....
Yes....i can definitely relate to dis......
and d photographs helped too.....
I luv it vish.....
I think dis is ur best one till date......:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are truly lucky to have such a dad on your side to shoulder your smile.
Nice one...very sweet.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I just love reviewing such personal pieces of writing.. why? Because they are genuine and straight from the heart!!! You made my day.. this one is so touching.. you definitely should consider maybe framing this one and giving it to your father for father's day or a birthday maybe.. I've written for members of my family and there is so much personality and passion in each piece! Thank you for sharing this...there is no love like that of a Dad!!! sincerely.. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I am sure he is proud of you and you are of him and i am so happy that you wrote this special one for him....
and you are such a sensible kid

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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