goodbye..!

 

The prettiest thing in this world is to be loved by someone…

But the worst thing is to love someone who doesn’t love you back…!

But still you carry that broken heart and love them…

This pain is so true and so real

Loving someone makes us feel so much adorable…

To love someone is to give them the right to hurt you

To love someone is to feel there hurts in your heart…

Feel there happiness as smiles on your face…

And if they don’t love you back it feels as if you’re lost in this crowded world….

 

When I met him first day it was a pleasure for me…that day I met my love…

That day I met my life….I met my soul mate…my prince charming…yeah! I met my life…my life…we talked…we laughed…we smiled…we walked miles…

It was the best feeling…his innocence made me mad….his smile was heartbreaking…

Yeah! He was the right guy…

 

Time went on and on. and we were best pals….the other day when I was carrying a rose in my hand and was going express my feelings I came to know he loves someone else he told me…I was so broken to hear that…it felt It was a dream but it wasn’t…he never told me that before…why he did that to me…why?…I’m broken inside….this smile on my face is fake…I wear this fake smile everyday….and no one knows how much I miss you….

 

You were my world and now my world is lost

You were my life and now my life is no more

You were my smile and now my smile is lost…

You weren’t my cry but you are now..

Time was flowing so fast I couldn’t hold it in my hands,

This life is killing me inside but I can’t say anything….

How much I miss you no one knows but I’m dying for you

You left me and I’m leaving this world for you…

Goodbye my life

Goodbye my lover….

 

 

 

Author's Note

ignore typo's and grammatical mistakes...:| ^_^

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very sad.. great flow and emotion in there.. killer ending.. I hope that is not real as the world would be short of a very gifted writer!!! It does hurt when we confess our emotions and it is not reciprocated back to us.. it is better to know though as soon as possible so that it does not grow even more in fantasy. Why your friend did not tell you that they were in love with someone is odd.. usually friends discuss these things.. things closest to them. It could be your friend was developing feelings too and afraid to disclose the truth.. you can still remain friends but be careful!!! Love your depth in your writing... love unfortunately can be pain! Everyone has been there!=)

[Imperfection]

A very sensitive piece of writing with very strong feelings. This is very sad.

The person I love once told me that he wasn't afraid of losing me because if I was happy with someone else he would be happy for me. I didn't understood it then. I thought that if you love someone, you do everything to be with that person, to spend your lives together and be happy with each other. I thought he was crazy when he said that he would be happy for me if I were happy elsewhere.

But now that we're no longer together i understand what he meant. I still love him and perhaps I will never let another person take his place but now I am able to realize and acknowledge the fact that loving him means being happy for his happiness, even if that happiness does not include me.

There is always the sorrow of losing the dreams you had built. But you know that wherever he is and with whoever he might be, he is happy.

[Akash]

That's beautiful yet so sad.
The obvious pain and agony intensify this work and strings myriad of emotions.
Something rarely a writer acheive here....the ability to touch the soul of the readers.
Very good....

[Shelly Araujo]

beautiful and intense, your words describe so well how we all find love and passion to be even though we may not show it or discuss it as well as you do; At this stage in my life I can look back on all the good loves and the ones that ended in pain and be grateful for them all. When I was younger, not so much, so just know there comes a time when all our loves bring joy in their own way.

[Anita B Jacques]

A great write my friend, much emotions and sadness, it's so well written I can't tell if you are in pain from a lost love. I hope not, if you are, times heal all pains, even the lost of a Soul Mate. God Bless you.
Hugs, love and friendship
Annie

[Alice Oiseau]

Ah, the heartbreak of being told you aren't the one he loves.
Though, if one truly loves another, I believe they can set aside those negative emotions, and be happy for him. If he is happy with someone else, isn't that what matters? His happiness? Just a thought, and one that I live by.

Love is a double edged sword. It's also give and take.

A good emotionally intense poem.
Cheers.

[Victoria Harlequin]

So emotional, very sad. Nicely written! Also, I'm not sure if this is just me or you meant it to sound that way,
but she kills herself in the end? :[ Anyway, great write.
Love sucks sometimes!

[Fallen Angel]

Thats... so beautiful! I love it!