my PILLOW was there always

my PILLOW was there always

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 

When I’m sad I cry on it...
When I’m happy I hug it...
When I’m angry I fight with it...
When I’m excited I share with it...
When I have questions to ask I ask with it...
When I’m unable to sleep in mid night I talk with it
My pillow is like my best pal….
And sometimes it is all what you have…

 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
ignore grammatical and typo's....
:P:P...:)

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lol. nice. this one is interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely enjoyable sweet write! Thank you for submitting
this to my contest! ~ Helena

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Totally agree....but I'll replace the pillow with my teddy bear (yeah I know I'm
too old.......but oh well) I really liked it because it's so honest and true. Sometimes
who we think or know should be there when we're happy or sad is no where to be
found so only the things around us are used to comfort. Very nice

Posted 15 Years Ago


Universal truth...
am hugging my pillow so i know YEAH!!
The personal touch adds a charm to your work...
Nice read...

Posted 15 Years Ago


pillows...YEAH...soft, always there and they take all our sorrows in the night when we sleep on it and it soaks up all our tears....!!
nice and different Vaishali...very nice...
who won't agree with this lovely theme

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was the truth... sometimes the only thing we can share our true feelings with on those long, lonely nights is our pillows. the pic you chose is adorable!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice! I'm having trouble sleeping tonight and keep finding all these sleep and pillow related writings. I think this is a very special piece of writing. I think that people do have relationships with their pillows. Ha, guess you can tell I'm a pillow person. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a creative write, Vaishali! Where would any of us be without our pillows?! I relate to this write as I have done many of the things you speak of.

Thanks for sharing this. The pic you chose is absolutely PERFECT!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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