LIFE is mere DEVIL for those who FEAR

Every time loosing hope

Because of your childish fear

Is coward ness…

What matters is that

You stand up and fight back

The DEVIL called LIFE…

Author's Note

this is what i have learned..!!:| and at times you really need to stand and fight back..!!

Reviews

[The High Poet]

I have learned to stand and fight back my entire life. My father was a very aggressive man so I guess I picked some of that up. It too me a long time to realize that I don't need to waste energy fighting this life. Instead I have decided to go with it and ride that wave. That being said I did enjoy reading this write. Keep them coming.

The High Poet

[Victoria Harlequin]

This is great and so true.
Great write!

[BLACKCRUSH]

That's so true, no matter what life throws at you , you must stand on your own two feet. Good work on this poem .

[Gathering_Stars]

This is really good and it's definately true. A wise man once said ; ) "Life shrinks or expands on proportion to one's courage." If we don't have the courage to live life we won't ever know what life is more than breathing or exhaling.

There were some typo's that took away from the piece, so I'd just run it through spell check but other than that it's great.

[Anita B Jacques]

Yes I agree with you, espacialy when it's real difficult, nice write, thank you for sharing. God Bless you.

[perfectlymetiKulous]

Absolutely...
Fighting back/fighting for what you believe in is paramount in this thing we call life.
This was a very powerful piece, conveyed a very strong emotion in very few words.
Thanks for the read request; can't wait to read more of your work. :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

You know life is not about how and where you fall but its all about how to face life again and how you stand up again every time you fall..
This is just incredible, short yet so vivid and strong..
Great work!