i'm SORRY i cannot AMEND it

i'm SORRY i cannot AMEND it

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

I fear this pain
I fear what I was
And what I have become

I wonder what life was
And what it has become
I regret for choosing wrong path
I regret my decision about life

I was mistaken in judging things
And I’m sorry I can't amend it
Time slipped like water from my hand
And I was not capable enough to hold it back

I got many wounds b'coz of my heart full decision
But I was so helpless I can't weep...
Happiness came but so fatal to clear the wounds of my emptiness
Life took me to a fork stage I weep while smiling

I’m amazed if I will ever come out of this double sided road
But I please life not to break me again
It’s very hard for me to hold broken pieces of my heart
I’m not capable to hold it any more

I’m SORRY god....your child have lost this fight. “FORGIVE ME"
 
 


 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
this is something straight from my heart...else poem itself describes..!

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This is a very touching poem, Vaishali, and it hit my heart in one go! Honestly, I am at such a stage of life right now, that I think this was meant for me....Thank you for sharing this with me...it so so so beautifully sad!

Love the piece in all. A few typos/grammar errors, but overall, really good. Keep up the work, dear, and keep sharing!

God Bless!

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This is a very touching poem, Vaishali, and it hit my heart in one go! Honestly, I am at such a stage of life right now, that I think this was meant for me....Thank you for sharing this with me...it so so so beautifully sad!

Love the piece in all. A few typos/grammar errors, but overall, really good. Keep up the work, dear, and keep sharing!

God Bless!

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is very emotional, and you have a good sense of vocabulary.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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