i'm SORRY i cannot AMEND it

I fear this pain

I fear what I was

And what I have become

I wonder what life was

And what it has become

I regret for choosing wrong path

I regret my decision about life

I was mistaken in judging things

And I’m sorry I can't amend it

Time slipped like water from my hand

And I was not capable enough to hold it back

I got many wounds b'coz of my heart full decision

But I was so helpless I can't weep...

Happiness came but so fatal to clear the wounds of my emptiness

Life took me to a fork stage I weep while smiling

I’m amazed if I will ever come out of this double sided road

But I please life not to break me again

It’s very hard for me to hold broken pieces of my heart

I’m not capable to hold it any more

I’m SORRY god....your child have lost this fight. “FORGIVE ME"

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is something straight from my heart...else poem itself describes..!

Reviews

[Life Calling!!!]

This is a very touching poem, Vaishali, and it hit my heart in one go! Honestly, I am at such a stage of life right now, that I think this was meant for me....Thank you for sharing this with me...it so so so beautifully sad!

Love the piece in all. A few typos/grammar errors, but overall, really good. Keep up the work, dear, and keep sharing!

God Bless!

[Lyrical Love]

This is a powerful write! The emotions are raw-giving a tangible
perspective of your pain.
Kudos!

[NatashaSophia]

A very personal and touching piece, Vaishali. Thank you for sharing it with me.

When you say "You weep while smiling" do you mean you still see the hope in life?
I get a mixed signal of where you are at, such as hoping that life won't hurt you again but also still being in a place of hurt. I am not sure how to better clarify the feeling and emotion.

Thank you again for sharing and I would love to read more of your work in the near future.

[Walkingblind]

Wow I love your emotion it's great, we all understand this area in life I believe.
Where we've done wrong and though we wish we could take it back, start all
over, or heal it, we can't. Nothing mortal and temporary can ever fix something
emotional. We can't amend our wrongs not even with a sorry, because sorry is nothing
but a bandage:

I'm SORRY god....your child have lost this fight.
"FORGIVE ME"

This is the only sorry that heals, it is the one that askes for forgiveness.
I like this because it should how human we all are. This is a great poem
trully excellent

[We are young.]

This was amazing! I love the emotions in it

[Kelley]

Well there is hope and I did enjoy reading this. Sadness needs a place to escape sometimes and I feel writing about it helps me. Anyway great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[BLACKCRUSH]

This was a beautiful burst of light into my darkness, very rarely do I read a poem that makes me smile as much as yours did. I found your poem captivating and full of heavens light. It was sad in some parts but it was also touching. I think you did a good job overall.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is so raw and so so dark till the very core, it felt as if you have poured your heart here..
According to me, this is by far your best work :)
This is so beautifully sad and heart touching Vaishali...Awesome
A brilliant piece of writing it is :)

[MyDearRobby]

i LOvE ThIs iTs VErY ToUcHiNg To ThE hEaRt AnD i LoVe THe pIc
GoD BlEss

[Anita B Jacques]

yes you are right, you have to let it flow, so much better you will feel, gradually of course. I like your free style writing, maybe its because I do the same thing, write from the heart and you will find your Soul. Thank you for sharing.
In friendship......Annie

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very touching and it breaks my heart... please forgive your heart... we all make decisions we regret and it is a part of life and life's lessons.. forgiveness is the only way to heal.. god is forgiveness find him in your heart and remember that we all make mistakes!!! thank you for sharing!