i'm SORRY i cannot AMEND it

I fear this pain

I fear what I was

And what I have become

I wonder what life was

And what it has become

I regret for choosing wrong path

I regret my decision about life

I was mistaken in judging things

And I’m sorry I can't amend it

Time slipped like water from my hand

And I was not capable enough to hold it back

I got many wounds b'coz of my heart full decision

But I was so helpless I can't weep...

Happiness came but so fatal to clear the wounds of my emptiness

Life took me to a fork stage I weep while smiling

I’m amazed if I will ever come out of this double sided road

But I please life not to break me again

It’s very hard for me to hold broken pieces of my heart

I’m not capable to hold it any more

I’m SORRY god....your child have lost this fight. “FORGIVE ME"

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is something straight from my heart...else poem itself describes..!

Reviews

[Life Calling!!!]

This is a very touching poem, Vaishali, and it hit my heart in one go! Honestly, I am at such a stage of life right now, that I think this was meant for me....Thank you for sharing this with me...it so so so beautifully sad!

Love the piece in all. A few typos/grammar errors, but overall, really good. Keep up the work, dear, and keep sharing!

God Bless!

[QuietPoet]

This was deep.. I can relate to this.. I was here too.. You are not alone.. Keep your head up, it'll get better real soon.. Believe..

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

So much of depression.......
So much sadness......
It really makes me sad to read this....
Otherwise.....its a very gud one....

[Ralphy]

Your write very well, I like that way you express your feelings and say what you feel in your heart. Much that you say, carries a wounded message of failure, only your haven't failed so I'm not sure why it radiates like that...never commit to lossing the fight, your heart is resilient...nice write.

[James Hall]

Stay strong!

Good writing.

[TheGenius]

I loved this line:

"Time slipped like water from my hands..."

[Nish Nish the Fish]

i loved the analogy of time slipping from your hands like water, very beautiful and thought provoking.
i agree with all the other commentators of this creation when saying we all come across this bump in our road of life. but coming across this rock once or twice teaches us to not pick it up the next time. So don't regret your mistakes, learn from them.

wonderful read! very beautifully written!

[Pratibha]

you have not lost it Vaishali. You have not...Trust GOD, this feeling is normal and is temporary....
Move on and leave your problems behind. Don't look back

[Kimberly_ eternal dream..]

soo beautifuly xpres'd vaishali !!
it'z realy soo good! n ya, soo sad !
it'z somthin every person cum acros in ter lyf'z!
try'n 2 erase ter mistk'z n wrong decision'z tey tuk by tym travel'n!
v knw, v cant ..
yet v luk 4 tis little fantasy...

gud re!

-eternal kim

[poetic soul]

we all are at this spot sometime in life.....wrong decisions ruin everything we had....which is true....but regretting is not a good idea.....coz had you not made the wrong decisions you wouldnt be emerging as a strong person that you are today and the wrong decisions you take today, will be yo hard learnt lessons tomorrow.... :) so never regret a mistake, learn from it and move on.....it mayb easier said than done but believe me its not so impossible! :)

nice poem but............emotions are deep and raw....looks like a "direct dil se"

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This poem is filled with emotion. Well done!