It's All About LIFE..!!

It’s all about what we do...

And not about what we get

It’s about doing something

And not just dreaming anything

You need to believe in yourself

To achieve what you want

You need to believe what you are

to be what you want to be

It’s all about how original you are

Not how popular you are

It’s about being true to you

And not fake to others...

What you were born is not in your hands

But what you become is in your hands

Take life seriously 

And not like a game

If life is a game it’s playing very well

And how much you try you'll be out one day

It’s mistake of taking everything as a game

It’s about how sincere you were when need to be

It's not only about finding faults you do

But it’s how you amend it

Its not why you hurted others

But it’s how you apologize...

It’s not counting how many time they hurted you

But appreciating many times they made you smile

It’s about your life

And how you live it...!

 

Author's Note

don't know what to write here...the poem itself describe the point...:|
and this time avoid my grammatical mistakes...

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Really, this is exactly what life is all about...
Life is not always what it seems like...it could make you smile and cry at the same time, it is all about experiencing the unexpected....its not a dream or movie...it is just LIFE
A very thoughtful and deep piece of writing with which most of us can relate ourselves to.
Great work Vaishali :)

[Emmmaaa! ;D]

This is so true, if only people could see it. Great piece, lovely concept.

[Sean Allen]

The world would be a better place if everyone followed your advice in this poem.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A very good drafted piece of poetry. Life is what we make of it isn't it. Well done!

[Nosyt]

Good Poem, I like the times you had play on words in the beginning. I try to do this in my own writing, sometimes it works, sometimes it comes out corney, you did it pretty well

[poemprincess]

This is awesome I loved it. Keep it up

[lovelyangel09]

that was a beautiful write!

[Life Calling!!!]

Thanks for the read request....had read it yesterday, but wanted to go over it again before reviewing it.... it's a beautiful piece, in its truth and austerity...I think every word uttered there comes from your heart, and will touch the heart of each person that read your piece....such depth and profundity there is that it simply makes it difficult to see the grammatical mistakes....there are quite a lot, but you wanted to be excused this time, so well......but hey, if you change your mind let me know....will definitely oblige!

Interesting read!

God Bless!