questions that remained unanswered..!!

questions that remained unanswered..!!

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

i can't bear this pain..why life gave this to me..
i just wanna ask god?
why only i have to suffer...?what i did..what was my mistake...?
everytime when i thought happiness is on the next door,why you ruin my world..
everytime when i tried to stand up..why you let me down..?
why only i have to face failures in every step...?
how much i tried...day when i was trying to come back to life...
why you squashed me again..?
each and every moment when i tried to recover..why don't you let me....?
why my friends cheated me..why i can't be happy..?
why am surrounded by lonliness...
each and everyday i pray...make this day a happy one in my life
why can't you see me happy...
 
 i just can't bear this....
friendship was only thing left with me...
but you took that also...why you made fake friends...
they cheated me like anythings....i'm hurt...
how i am going to heal these wounds....
how i will forget the pain...
how i will forget those hurting moments...
why you did this with me?
 

 

 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


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Often we all face situations like this, and sometimes we do want god to answer us but then the irony is that few questions in our life always remain unanswered, because thats the way they should be!

I liked this piece of writing, but I think you should work on its structure as well as on the fonts, its not easy for me to read :(

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Who is this creep anyway? I'm your friend, tell me where he lives. Then we'll get the answers. Again nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Often we all face situations like this, and sometimes we do want god to answer us but then the irony is that few questions in our life always remain unanswered, because thats the way they should be!

I liked this piece of writing, but I think you should work on its structure as well as on the fonts, its not easy for me to read :(

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 14, 2009
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