i walk alone

i walk alone in the dark seas of hope..!!

with a broken heart..i stay alone...!!

i need u back because i love so..!!

with a broken heart i live alone..!!

you left me back with the rotten world...!!

now i want you back b'coz am alone...!!

those feelings will never go...!!

b'coz you're my world..n now my world is no more...!

with the empty space in my heart...!!

am dying inside and left with my broken dreams...!!

and echos of my broken heart killing me inside...!!

am left here with nothing just memories..!!

i've lost you...i've lost everything..!!

one day when i'am gone...

 

 

this world will understand my importance...!!

till den i walk alone on a lonely road...!!

Author's Note

for this i got inspiration from the song boulevard of broken dreams...

Reviews

[John J. Smiley]

Bandages are for mending. Here have one of mine. Fill that empty space we more nice writing like this one.

[Imperfection]

Very strong feelings in this one and very well expressed too. I liked it also because I could relate to it - except for the last bit.

Looking forward to reading more of you.

[MyDearRobby]

BoUlEvArD oF BrOkEn DrEAmS sTaRtEd pLaYiNg iN mY HeAd aS I rEaD ThIS bUt uRs hAs a dIff mEaNinG TO iT.It vErY GOOd!AwEsOmE wOrK!

[Hotaru Miyuki]

it sounded just like boulevard of broken dreams! i love that song! i love this poem also! it goes along with the song but with a different meaning! Great Job!!!! XD