who cares

who cares

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

who cares...
who cares when i'm sad...
who cares when i'm helpless..
who cares when i need someone..
who cares....it just became aa part of my life...
why don't you care...when i need you..
why don't you hear when my heart calls you...
why can't you hear echo's of m broken heart..
why can't you...?
i need noone..just you...only you...but you don't care...
care is the sweetest essence..but you don't care..
it hurts so much hearing you don't care...
it crushes me from inside...
it leaves me with the hollow heart....
but you don't care..!

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


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Aaaaah...Care..Love..Time.. What else one could ever want.. I crave for it. . Everyone does.
But who cares. It's a wound. Heart bleeds.. but.. Who cares. True. Very very true..very beautifully written..And its sad.
If someone CANNOT care for you..Don't expect anything from that someone. Else it'd be more painful.. the wound would bleed...Much more pain..when expectations die.. It hurts..Too bad.
It may be easy for some to get used to it..to stop expecting. . To say i don't care..for you either.. But it's not easy for all. It hurts. We can't help it. It hurts badly.
But .. You've cried your heart out. You've shed your tears. . You're done. And if even then no one cares.. Let them suffer. It's not your fault.
Let them need you now. You're the World. You're Life.. They can't live without you.
You have your wings..Spread them wide.. You don't need anyone. . .to fly. Fly. Let them see..You don't need them. And.. They'll come to you. It's your time. Believe. . .
But.. do your part..Don't let love die inside.
You care..that matters.
Do care. Love's not to expect but to accept. Don't be like them.
Love..and it'll come to you. May be it's not easy. . . But it's always worth the efforts. Don't give in..Keep up your faith.
Take care.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Aaaaah...Care..Love..Time.. What else one could ever want.. I crave for it. . Everyone does.
But who cares. It's a wound. Heart bleeds.. but.. Who cares. True. Very very true..very beautifully written..And its sad.
If someone CANNOT care for you..Don't expect anything from that someone. Else it'd be more painful.. the wound would bleed...Much more pain..when expectations die.. It hurts..Too bad.
It may be easy for some to get used to it..to stop expecting. . To say i don't care..for you either.. But it's not easy for all. It hurts. We can't help it. It hurts badly.
But .. You've cried your heart out. You've shed your tears. . You're done. And if even then no one cares.. Let them suffer. It's not your fault.
Let them need you now. You're the World. You're Life.. They can't live without you.
You have your wings..Spread them wide.. You don't need anyone. . .to fly. Fly. Let them see..You don't need them. And.. They'll come to you. It's your time. Believe. . .
But.. do your part..Don't let love die inside.
You care..that matters.
Do care. Love's not to expect but to accept. Don't be like them.
Love..and it'll come to you. May be it's not easy. . . But it's always worth the efforts. Don't give in..Keep up your faith.
Take care.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey! Don't worry. I care.
Smiley

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i LoVe uR pEoM AnD I hAtE WhEn thE PeRsOn i lOVe uSeS THe wOrDs "I dOn't cArE" wHeN tHeY gEt fUsTRaTeD..iTs sAd bUt tHeY uSaUllY SaY tHeIr sOrrY AnD TrY To mAkE It uP.i ReaLLy LovE Ur pEoM!:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

in life we learn to look out for ourselves because no one will, to love ourselves cause no one
will, no one can care for you better than you except God of course. We have to guard our
heart and dont think other people will do it for us. We have to live on our own even when
surrounded by other people. Very nice poem, very understandable, I applaud u

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the world is full of such people who dont really give a damn! start to live with it gurl....this is nice painful write......

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very deep and I can relate. Great write�

Voice


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

feels like i'm reading the story of my life........!
very nice work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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