You Are In Love With Her

If after seeing her;

You smell the fragrance,
Of the absent flower;
You feel the pleasant excitement,
Causing a little shiver;
You like to forget to blink,
And only continue seeing her;
You think that everything in the world,
You can conquer.

If while talking with her;

You feel that days are too short,
And clocks tick too early;
You take her pretending anguish,
Most seriously;
You enjoy the vibrations of her lips,
And glimpses of her teeth;
You imagine that you two are up in the sky,
And the whole world beneath.

If after bidding farewell to her;

You want to think about the dresses,
She had so beautifully put on;
You repent for not observing her minutely,
During her association;
You feel that your words to her,
Could be put in much a better way;
You decide to make her happier,
During the meeting next day.

If while missing her;

You do not like to talk to anybody,
But only to think about her;
You avoid the familiar faces,
And sit in a quiet corner;
You imagine that she is next to you,
And talk to her in murmur;
You feel that clocks tick too slowly,
And days are too longer.

If while going to meet her;

You comb your hair,
More than what you do usually;
You forget to look at the girls,
Moving around you so closely;
You doubt that people are looking at you,
With questions in their eyes;
You apprehend that your affair is known,
To all men and all the guys.

Then my friend, you are in love with her.

Reviews

[tworeeler]

I can relate. Nicely structured, and most importantly, honest.

Keep up the good work.

[Shin]

Nice job on this poem and describing love, but isn't hate just as powerful? Do things you never thought you could do is something both love and hate share, I think they go by the hand.

[dovetailer]

Nothing is as intoxicating...or as debilitating...or as paralyzing as love...
yet we pity those who have never loved because they have never felt the strongest emotion that we can...and they will never understand our paralysis until they do...
all of us that have been where you are say "AMEN!"Terrific

[Coyote Poetry]

When it happen. Nothing you can do about it. Love is like a runaway train. No stopping it till it find it target. A very good poem. I like the description and the very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chilson, Joshua]

The raw power of love, almost like insanity as you sink away from the world that can be so cruel, just to feel another moment in the company of that beloved person. This is something I miss dearly, a drawing emotion that everyone should welcome in life. The spiral in time where everything else amounts little to how you feel.

[KalebG (Cry Faux)]

Love, a sight i am experiencing, it hold many tides in life, everything here describes the right feeling how, people reacts to a person they love, i have experience till this day, and i wont forget that feeling as long as i live.
KG3

[Ian Faraway]

I enjoyed this poem, it was very different than what I'm use to reading. Good job and keep it up.

[KaySea]

lovely

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Lovely poem :)
Nice job :D