Valentine's Day

Valentine's Day

A Poem by RJM
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It's valentines day already here in my country and well I just wanted to share what I feel during the day of hearts which is coincidentally my birthday

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Valentine's Day

Sappy love songs 
blasting on the radios

Loving couples staring
wildly at each other

Red and Pink hearts
spread all over the world

Cupid's out with his 
arrows nocked

Love is in the air 
and we're all screwed

Cause f**k Valentine's 
here again this year

© 2011 RJM


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I'm sure that St Hallmark the patron saint of pointless celebratory days will be furious with this poem!

You've managed to strike a nice balance between sarcasm and bitterness that makes this poem very effective. It would have been easy to simply vent your hate but doing it this way would bring a wry smile to the face of even the most ardent supporter of Valentines day.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Haha a nice touch on the last verse. You could sense that something was a little bit off from the way you described the lovers wild look at each other. Not to mention, "sappy" love songs. :P Nicely done :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


i feel you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm sure that St Hallmark the patron saint of pointless celebratory days will be furious with this poem!

You've managed to strike a nice balance between sarcasm and bitterness that makes this poem very effective. It would have been easy to simply vent your hate but doing it this way would bring a wry smile to the face of even the most ardent supporter of Valentines day.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

valentines day, a day to make those who are single feel more alone...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, yes, Valentine's Day, how I hate it. Sappy, really, is what it is. Almost seems fake, cheesy, unreal. And all the worse for the single people. Nice job capturing all that. Love the ending.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good description of how cliche Valentine's day seems to be

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with you. If you love someone. Be kind and loving year around. Great description and a perfect ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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RJM
RJM

Manila, Philippines



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