Take My Hand

Take My Hand

A Poem by RJM
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If only all my moments with her were like this

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Take My Hand

Shut all the lights 
and take my hand

Under the moon and
stars we shall go together


Nothing to stop us,
Nothing to hold us back

For tonight we 
are the world
Your hand in mine, my hand 
in yours clasped tightly

Together our hearts beat 
as one, with the world
at our feet and the stars
above us 

Though this night will
not last forever and 
this moment will soon
be over 

Still our love will 
remain forever no
matter what 

© 2010 RJM


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Timeless...Hallmark writer in the making. Truly exquisite to read!

Together our hearts beat
as one, with the world
at our feet and the stars
above us

Gorgeous!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite a romantic poem. The language is simple and straightforward, but that works fine here. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


now this is love where two become one.
Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nice one! oh yan ah! I signed up for me to comment on your work! :)) bd

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ahh a very sweet ode to love - despite the tribulations - the love will linger on throughout!! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very inspiring! I would like to thank you for the reviews on my poems, you to me are like a role model. That is the first time I have ever said that to anyone. You really lifted my spirit. Thank You!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

inspiring and perfectly expressed... a love poem... i've always wanted to write one of those. sadly, i've got a block on it. great write. =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your poem is simple, but so powerful and provokes many feelings...I like it much!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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RJM
RJM

Manila, Philippines



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