Take My Hand

If only all my moments with her were like this

Take My Hand

Shut all the lights 

and take my hand

Under the moon and

stars we shall go together

Nothing to stop us,

Nothing to hold us back

For tonight we 

are the world

Your hand in mine, my hand 

in yours clasped tightly

Together our hearts beat 

as one, with the world

at our feet and the stars

above us 

Though this night will

not last forever and 

this moment will soon

be over 

Still our love will 

remain forever no

matter what 

Reviews

[Muse]

Timeless...Hallmark writer in the making. Truly exquisite to read!

Together our hearts beat
as one, with the world
at our feet and the stars
above us

Gorgeous!

[Robert Haigh]

Quite a romantic poem. The language is simple and straightforward, but that works fine here. Thanks for sharing.

[Mauricio Montoya]

now this is love where two become one.
Excellent write.

[MG]

Nice one! oh yan ah! I signed up for me to comment on your work! :)) bd

[OT]

ahh a very sweet ode to love - despite the tribulations - the love will linger on throughout!! nice!

[Brook Hughes]

This is very inspiring! I would like to thank you for the reviews on my poems, you to me are like a role model. That is the first time I have ever said that to anyone. You really lifted my spirit. Thank You!

[MarcoftheBeast]

inspiring and perfectly expressed... a love poem... i've always wanted to write one of those. sadly, i've got a block on it. great write. =)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Your poem is simple, but so powerful and provokes many feelings...I like it much!

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