The Feeling

The Feeling

A Poem by Us&Them
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The hopeless romantic reminisces of Rest, Leisure & Love

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As I lay the burden of gravity is cut in half.
Only for that missing half to become lonesome.

A rush a mixture of emotions,
the high like the emotions are euphoric and ambiguous. 

Neurotransmitters overwhelm the body and mind, 
security validation the pinnacle. 

I can see me in your eyes...

Sensitive to the touch clam intense confusion 
still is the environment,
yet i cant listen or hear a trace of silence.

Time dose not exist at the most fundamental level of physical reality,
vying for this nirvana is this feeling. 
The Feeling to lay next to you.  

By E.H 

"Dictated but not Read" 

© 2013 Us&Them


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A very unique poem. thanks for sharing (:


Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks (-: again dueds & neurotransmitters are the chemicals released by the brain when in Love... Or Infatuated by a significant other

Oh oh and (plank time) i didn't include but did imply ...is the smallest unit of time that has any physical meaning is 10-43 second, less than a trillionth of a trillionth of an attosecond.

Time dose not exist- not when when u love

Posted 11 Years Ago


i enjoyed this, of what I could read, i don't know what some of the words are.
But enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this, it was different but in a futuristic way. It flowed nicely.
~Tasha

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 12, 2013
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Tags: The, Feeling, The Feeling, Dyadic, Interpersonal, Time, First love
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The following : Jotted down expressions of a mind. A mind engaged in a struggle to justify reality. Similar to you the reader I hope (-: more..

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