Now I Am Strong

Hey You, Thank You...
Thank You for everything you have done
Thank you, Thank you for letting me down
Cuz it makes me Strong and fearless woman

Hey You,Thank you...
Thank you for not coming when I need You most
Thank you , Thank you for not trusting me anymore
Cuz it makes me more mature and sensible

Now I don't feel upset anymore
Now I am Strong , Now I am independent
Now I am more happy then anyone else

Thank you ,Thank you for making me strong...

Author's Note

ignore my grammatical problems.. thank you

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Many times in life people will let us down. Most of the time it isn’t done intentionally but there are times when it is and well yes it’s a learning experience and allows us to become stronger, more independent

[U.Berry]

Yes you are right and i am agree with you .

[Sharda]

Written from the heart and well told.
Personally I would prefer if you did not use the word 'strong' repeatedly, but otherwise it is a pretty poem

[U.Berry]

Thank you very much.. i will remember it.. hope you like the poem . And thank you for your review.😊

[Nomkhumbulwa]

Another beautiful inspiring piece of writing :)

[U.Berry]

Thank you very much 😊.. hope u like it 😊

[Deadline Jeffrey]

Very powerful emotion. Keep writing!

[U.Berry]

Thank you.. Hope u liked it😊

[Ranfer]

It’s like u have experienced something like that.Realy a poem expressing your heart’s feelings...very touching

[U.Berry]

Thank you Ranfer..😊Hope you enjoyed 😊

[Sean Clemons]

Have you been hurt? I can feel the battle inside.

[U.Berry]

Thank you 😊..Its really glad to hear that you can feel it in your inside..Hope you like this poem😊..Thank you for your review .

[ohiojohn]

Oh, and Emily Dickinson used many DASHES ---- in her poetry. At the time of her death, her sister Lavinia (Vinnie), found a wealth of compositions in her private dresser.

On first publication, by Thomas Wentworth Higginson and Mabel Loomis Todd, they left out dashes and edited punctuation, etc. They thought the Poems would be better accepted in the contemporary populace if done so.

Not until 1955 when The great T.H Johnson compilation was published were the Dashes and other nuances presented to the Literary World.

[U.Berry]

I really didnt know that .. thank u again 😊

[ohiojohn]

There no grammatical errors in poetry/verse. Self expression/feelings has no dictionary, just
a personal diary of yourself.

Good write.

John

[U.Berry]

Thank you 😊

[ohiojohn]

Read E.E Cummings or Ezra Pound, see their styles.

[U.Berry]

I will .. thank u again 😊

[William]

This is the hard reality to life, some things brake you but they strengthen you.

[U.Berry]

Yes,Thank you for your review😊Hope you like it😊

[Chris Shaw]

Great message in these words. You can grow stronger where you were once broken. An inspiring write fo those who have been let down.

Chris

[U.Berry]

yeah and Thank you Chris😊Hope you enjoyed😊

[Chris Shaw]

I did indeed

[Chris Shaw]

Good to read this again.I loved the feisty attutude.

Chris

[U.Berry]

Thank you 😊