Some Promises are True

                  “Some Promises are true”

 

“Promise”, a little word which has a lot of meaning. Some promises are true and some not.

 

There were 5 best friends, Rizal, Rain, Cloud, Andy and Tree.  They studied together and they shared their many secrets with each other. They went same school and same college. In short, they are soul mates. They know each other very much. Now they live in different countries. They are now established. But they have their numbers. They talk each other and chat each other. They want to meet each other in real life .So, they promised that, in this holiday they will meet each other in their Hangout place.  They were very excited and very happy to meet each other. They took gifts for each other’s.

 

  They decided at 5:00 pm in their Hangout place .At last that day came. They were very happy. One by one everyone came there but one of them didn’t come there still. Her name was Tree.  Then Rain called her to come quickly. In reply Tree said that she is on her way. They hug each other and talked about many things and give them gifts. On the other hand Tree also took some gifts for them. There was a little restaurant near their hangout place. They decided to go there. They called Tree and said her to go there. After One and half hour later they said “why Tree still not come here? She promises that she will come. Is she ok?” After that suddenly the electricity went off. And Andy has ‘Nyctophobia’ which is called afraid in darkness or night. Andy starting shouting and told everyone to on light. Everyone went busy to turn on lighter in phone. Then one girl in White beautiful dress with candle come forward to Andy. Then everyone thanked her and watched that it was Tree, who is their friend. They was very happy when they saw Tree. They hugged each other. After that, the electricity came .And they talked each other, did a lot of jokes, and laughed together. After then it’s time to back home. They came out from restaurant and walked together. Suddenly Rizal’s phone rang. Tree’s mother called Rizal and said in crying voice that ‘’ Tree is no more. She passed away few hours back. She was in her way to meet u guys but suddenly a car came and hit her and then she died in spot and we just identify her body. Her dead body is in front of mine.’’ After listening that Rizal dropped her phone in ground. Then cloud said that,” Are you ok? Is everything alright?” In replied Rizal said that, “Tree is no more. She passed away in a car accident”. Then everyone said, “Then who is she? Isn’t she Tree? ’’Then Tree said, “I am your friend Tree. I died few hours before I came here. I am here because I promised you guys that I will come and meet u guys. And my promise was true that’s y I came .I always miss you guys and always love you. Now I am very happy and now I can go where people never came back.’’ After saying that Tree’s soul vanished with glittery and the other friend’s breakdown with crying and they said that Thank you Tree for your friendship and we never forget about you. You always keep in our heart. We also love u and your promise was true .Thank u for that.

Reviews

[Sharda]

Well told story. I really liked the ending.
Some promises are meant to be kept esp the ones made to a friend

[U.Berry]

Thank you very much.. 😊😊

[¿]

It's a supernatural promise!!
I really liked the concept taken here and all the characters here.....
The end was tragic but as the promise was true it made the story splendid!!
Thanks for sharing😊
Happy writing!

[U.Berry]

Thank you Tahsin😊

[¿]

Wholly my pleasure, happy writing!😊

[U.Berry]

Ignore my mistakes
Thank you