the story of the lost crotchA Chapter by tyokonThis chapter introduces the main character, Okon, and his two friends Pringle and Marx.The lost crotch She sat on my face for half an hour,” Marx says and for
an instant humility is forced upon him. I can’t react to this craft that Marx performs with such
skill. Don’t get me wrong, it is an art form; but it is too asinine to move me,
too absurd to inspire desire, too grotesque for me to critique. I use to
consider myself a religious man before the military, but when my spirit
amalgamates with the likes of soldiers like Marx I begin to question myself. heart and a*s eating pro of his life. “You remember Amanda right?” he asks. He’s not intense,
but chipper and a rapid speaker. He’s not forceful, but animated and touchy
when he talks to people. After a year his overly anxious personality has worn
down my patience. Now our relationship has been reduced to nasty sex stories
and mind games. He is a respected Officer with aviation wings that he uses as a
weapon to win over females in Fayetteville. His body is so thin that it hunches
over slightly as though it can’t support his unusually large head. His a
metrosexual, the type that goes to the tanning salon, shaves his armpit hair,
showers three times a day, puts little cucumbers over his eyelids to prevent
the formation of bags, and practices his smile and wave in the mirror every
night before he goes to bed. I don’t react to his lusty punch lines on purpose. My
blank stare is like a move on a chess board. No matter how deep and vile he
attempts to be I simply stand in red and black checkered boxers and sip coffee
from my novelty Star Trek mug. He talks about an Asian girl named Yen, like the
currency. “She’s for ethnic purposes,” he says. “I don’t want anyone to call me
racist.” “What’s it like with an Asian?” I ask without making eye
contact. “She has a flat face and a flat rear end,” he says
laughing. He tells me about his sugar Mama who lives in Spring
Lake. “Her name is Wendy and I need her to gain wisdom,” he says with a
cerebral squint in his eyes and a highbrow stroke of his faint blond chin hair.
“Tomorrow I am going to Coffee Plantation with Selina,” his grin transforms
from mental to malicious in a split second. “We are going to practice Spanish.”
When he informs me of this he rubs his hands together like a fly does when it
lands on feces. To me it is all pointless, the search for sexual harmony
must be millennial. Marriage phobia and unprotected sex always lead to plan B
with young bucks like Marx. The self-righteous and the sober look down and ask
questions. The best answer is to label them generation Y. Their promises are
dressed in love, their emotions are cloaked in favor and fake smiles, but based
on bragging rights, finding yourself and becoming legends. To officers like
Marx silk Victoria’s Secret Panties on the bed post are like putting the
American flag on the moon before the Soviets. “I love Spanish women,” he says. “I will control a
Spanish chick someday.” “Why do you want to control a woman?” “Because a part of human nature is crazy,” he says. “I
want my woman to applaud every time I walk in the room, I want my bed made with
hospital corners, I want rose petals on the sheets, and when I leave I want to
see tears in her eyes.” “You don’t see anything wrong with what you’re saying?” I
ask attempting to sound as serious as possible. My profession in the military
makes it natural for me to ask too many questions, but I am becoming more
skilled at not judging. “Only that it’s every man’s dream to be God,” he says
with a fist pumping confidence. “It’s sad that everybody wants to do the
impossible, but I will do it someday.” “The only thinkg impossible about your dream is that
slavery is illegal,” I say. “It’s not slavery. It’s marriage,” Marx responds with a
smile. “I will marry the one female that obsesses over me the most and I will
rule the world that she lives in.” “What will that accomplish?” “I want to know what glory feels like.” What Marx wants is not evil or against any regulation,
but what drives him is more profound than a minor infraction. I cannot judge
because I have recently discovered I am equally as perverse, I too want to rule
the world. A big part of my job is saying prayers for soldiers before they
leave to the wars in the Middle East, but for the past two weeks I have been
unable to pray. I use to stand in a desk and speak to God without effort, I
could stand in line at a grocery store and have an entire conversation, sit at
a red light and direct questions to the heavens, but now it is becoming
impossible. Every man commits sins, but mine have severed my relationship with
those I hold closest. I didn’t know I was a sex addict until I met Marx. “You should do it,” I say. “But I think you have a serious
problem if you want to get married. You’re an addict.” “Addiction,” he says. “I’ve never done drugs in my life
besides Coke.” “I’m not talking about Cocaine; I think you’re an
elitist, I think you’re addicted to yourself.” “That’s impossible, I just want sex. You can’t be
addicted to sex, it’s a natural act.” Marx has made it explicitly clear that he
does not care that I am a Chaplain; he think the religious branch of the Army
is a ploy by timid soldiers who don’t want to die in war. Every chance he gets
he invites me to the strip club, he smokes a joint and blows it in my nostrils,
he drinks to excess and has a threesome with bartenders while I sit back and
watch. Corrupting me has become his hobby and unfortunately a small part of me
enjoys it. “You can be addicted to anything Marx, but I’m not
talking about sex. Your problem is you want to own people.” “My females don’t complain,” Marx says with a fake smile.
I can see his confidence is bruised and I am proud that I delivered a moral
blow to his mind. “Even if I don’t get the Sexy latina Selina, I still have
the wealthy Sierra,” Marx says smiling at his clever rhyme. “Who’s Sierra,” I ask. “She’s the nice girl in my life,” he reminds me. “Her
father ignored her, her maid touched her, and her mother taught her to submit
to every command of a man.” “Sounds like the language of a slave master.” “You don’t understand; I really want to build a moral
foundation with this one.” “You’re a hypocrite,” I say. “You just put your finger in
the high school sweetheart’s meat grinder, now you want to build a moral
foundation.” “But she’s a TV dinner goldmine,” he says in a pleading
way. He wants desperately for me to envy his mastery of Sierra. I can tell by
the way the words clip from his mouth and his animated widened eyes that this
Sierra female is little more than conquered land in his mind. “Her father
invested millions in Hungry man,” he continues. “Every time she comes over she
brings boxes of TV dinners and feeds me with my plastic silver wear as I lay in
bed. Her only deficiency is when I do her from behind she doesn’t arch her back
well enough. She is going to have to work on her flexibility if she wants to be
with me. She also brings condoms when she comes over which is a big no no in my
book.” “I wish you had more of a moral sense like Pringle,” I
say. “Pringle hasn’t had a drink in a full year.” Marx glares at me whenever I compare him to Pringle. He
doesn’t want me to know that Pringle is his thumbscrew, but they are natural
enemies. They are both in their mid 20’s, both blond, blue eyed, and sexually obsessive.
Pringle is my roommate and is currently engrossed in a new website he discovered
called 8th street Latinos. He refuses to answer any questions about
the website, but he claims it helps him with his Spanish. His door is currently
locked and he has been inside for hours without making a sound. “Don’t say his name,” Marx whispers with a serious strain
in his eyes. “Why not?” “Because then he’ll come out.” “Are you guys talking about me,” Pringle asks from inside
his room. I can hear him move from his bed to behind the door and stop. “Yes,” I say. “No,” Marx says in protest. Pringle opens the door and he is sweating heavily, his
shirt is off, he smells like cocoa butter, and he is wearing tan boxers and
black flip flops. “Why are you sweating,” Marx asks. He is never hesitant
or polite when asking a question; he’s more like an interrogator trying to
force a confession. Marx is a pilot and Pringle is an airtraffic controller;
somehow this makes them natural enemies. “I was practicing my Spanish on this new website called 8th
street Latinos,” he answers. “The most amazing thing happened today,” Pringle says.
“The Army announced that it is no longer testing for steroids since it is not
an illegal narcotic. So you already know what I’m going to do.” “What’s that,” I ask. “I’m obviously getting on steroids, I’m getting ripped
without even trying, and then I’m going to marry a Cuban girl with a thick
Spanish accent, who makes thick enchiladas, and has thick hips.” “Don’t let the Army brainwash you,” Marx says drawing out
his words in a nagging tone. “You can’t marry a Cuban girl,” Marx says. “Why not?” Pringle asks. His shoulders slouch as if his
heart is broken and he talks with his hands in his pockets. Hands in the pocket
are a faux pas in the Army, but this simply gives Marx a reason to act the part
of a rebel. “It is Castro territory; that will put you on a terrorist
watch list.” “What if she is second generation Cuban?” Pringle asks
with hope in his eyes. “If the Army wanted you to have a Cuban wife they would
issue you one,” Marx says. “You don’t need steroids to get a Spanish girl
anyway.” “I need bicepts, my lats need definition, my stomach
needs a six pack, my shoulders need size, and steroids can bless us all with
this.” “Don’t tell me you’re brainwashed too,” Marx says looking
at me. “He wants sex,” I say. “I don’t think you’re allowed in
the Army without being brainwashed by that.” “Even a man with your responsibility is brainwashed by
it,” Pringle asked. “Yes, but I am like Spok. I suppress those feelings and
act like a robot.” “These steroids are a way to get us ready to die,” Marx
says. “We will be paid to die in Syria within the next year. Those wars are
going to replace Iraq and Afghanistan. We are getting the Hitler treatment. The
steroids are going to make us Angry so that we fight without contemplating the
possibility of death. You know what? I think we will all die in Syria. That is
why I need a life time of women before the end of the year.” “Why would we go to war with Syria?” I ask. “The new war is in Syria, 25 thousand people have died
during a rebel uprising. Now President Asaad is asking for Western AID.” “Guerra,” Pringle says randomly. “That’s war in Spanish,
8th street latinos.com taught me that.” Marx rolls his eyes at Pringle and says, “We’re going to
all die in war again, so the only hope we have is reproduction.” “That’s why we should all use steroids,” Pringle says.
“Sergeant major Kemp is in support of steroid use, he says we should get roids
and tattoos to intimidate the enemy.” “You’re brainwashed,” Marx says. “You’re afraid,” Pringle says. “They’re drugging us up like Hitler did the Nazi’s,” Marx
says raising his voice. “So what, I like drugs and I like tattoos.” “You’re a sacrificial pon.” “I’m going to fill my body with steroids and cover it in
tattoos. I’ll be a work of art.” Marx holds up his IPhone two inches from my face. It hits
my coffee mug and Kenyan black coffee spills on the white floor. We ignore the
mess and focus on the screen. It is a CNN photo of Syrian president Asaad
posing with the twenty eight year old heir to the North Korean dictatorship. “This is proof that the Syrians are in bed with the North
Koreans,” Marx says. “We are all going to die again.” “Tatwahay,” Pringle says haphazardly. “8th
street latinos taught me that too.” Marx smacks his lips at the ugly accent and shakes his
head in frustration with Pringle’s aimlessness. “Did you learn that from your
porn site,” he asks. “It’s not a porn site,” Pringle says. His eyes are
sharpened and defensive. “It’s 8th street Latinos, it teaches you
how to pick up girls in Spanish and survive on 8th street in Miami.”
“It teaches you how to masturbate,” Marx says with a
suger-enduced rise in his voice. “That’s why you smell like cocoa butter lotion,” I say
pointing at his glossy fingertips. It’s been my guilty pleasure to put flame on the fire of
the rivalry between Marx and Pringle. One day the first punch will be launched
and I will get to sit back and enjoy. I can’t really feel like I’ve sinned
since I never directly tell them to fight. They both have built up angst from a
combination of sexual frustration and not achieving their teenage dreams. Marx walks to my cabinet and pulls out jalapeno chees,
spicy bean chili, and Frito scoop chips. He dumps the full bag in a highlight
green plastic bowl and covers the chips in chees and chili. Pringle opens the
fridge and pulls out a pack of Marlboro reds. “Why do you smoke,” Marx asks with contempt in his voice.
“You’re going to die of cancer.” “I’m fine with that as long as I enjoy a pack a day. Did
you guys know I have not had a drink in a year,” he asks as he smacks the red
pack in the palm of his strong hand. “That’s another reason I want a tattoo, to
celebrate my sobriety.” “Do you want to get a tattoo,” I ask Marx. “I don’t need a tattoo to know who I am,” he answers in a
grumpy old man tone. He licks the chili and cheese from his finger tips and
dumps a full bag of Ranch flavored flower seeds on a glass plate. “That’s the
type of idiotic thinking smokers do.” “You don’t want to be artsy,” Pringle asks. “I don’t want to be brainwashed, so I’m doing the
opposite of whatever you do,” Marx says. He grabs the salt shaker and adds salt
to his flower seeds. “Blaaack girls love tattoos,” Pringle says annoyingly
drawing out the ‘a’ and deepening his voice. “Yuck,” Marx says and dumps a handful of salted seeds in
his mouth. He doesn’t crack the seeds open with his teeth; he chews them until
they are little splinters and swallows the seeds and shells whole. “I want to be cultured, so I am going to start dating
black girls,” Pringle says shaking his head and looking at me as if we have
suddenly become closer. “I hope you like weaves and the smell of grease,” I say. Five minutes later we are riding in Pringle’s filthy 07
Honda Civic. Half of his closet and a can full of garbage is scattered
throughout the back of the vehicle. There is a baby seat full of banana peels
that forces me to lean against the window. On top of the banana peels are small
Sponge Bob blankets, a blond Barbie and toy hand-cuffs. Pringle is notorious
for keeping a baby seat in the back of his car because he believes that single
fathers attract females. This philosophy is born from the fact that his last
girl he obsessed over left him for a single father. On the other side of the
car seat is a brown pot with soil and a baby cactus inside. I pick up water
bottles filled halfway with Copenhagen spit and throw them on the side with the
cactus. “I see you cleaned a little since I last saw you,” Marx
says sarcastically. “I cleaned up a little bit,” Pringle responds honestly. “What are you going to get a tattoo of?” I ask Pringle. “I want thorny roses wrapped around a bottle of Patron
with a shark swimming inside,” he says. “It will represent how dangerous
alcohol is.” “Is that even possible,” Marx asks. “Anything is possible in art,” Pringle answers. “I’m also
going to cover my ex-girlfriends name on my ribcage with small hearts and
veins.” We pull into the tattoo parlor which is next door to a
bar named Blue moon Bobo’s. “A year ago my mouth would be watering at the sight of a bar,”
Pringle says proudly. “It has been so hard not to drink this past year. It
enhanced everything; I use to rush through meals just to get to the liquor, it
made cigarettes better, it helped me talk to girls, it became my wingman.” “I’m happy for you,” I say and pat him on the shoulder. “Thanks man, I miss the taste so much, but it almost took
my life.” The tattoo parlor has the set-up of a barber shop with
waiting chairs and three different artist doing work on a propped up wooden
floor. The walls are covered from top to bottom with the past work of the
artist. The different pictures of their customers range from falcon wings to golden
butterfly’s, there is a masculine skull on a man’s shoulder and the overused
‘laugh now cry later’ tattoo. There are curvaceous purple mermaids with
Sombreros riding killer whales, there are bearded Anacondas with human legs
hanging in the jungle, and facial tattoos of vomiting skulls. Pringle interrupts the artist in the center. The tattoo
artist has the full Zeus beard of a gentleman, one inch black gages in his ear
lobes, and one arm covered in a sleeve of tattoos. “You have more than an hour wait my friend,” he tells
Pringle with a barely noticeable Spanish accent. “There is a bar next door if
you want to wait there.” “I don’t drink, but we will hang out over there for a
while,” Pringle says. “What tattoo did you want,” he asks as Pringle and I walk
away. “The patron bottle and the one to cover my ex’s name.” Once we get to the bar Marx is already there and bragging
that he found a flare gun. “I’m going to give this to the drunkest guy I can find
and convince him to fire it,” he says with his sucrose induced jittery smile.
“What do you two want to drink?” he asks and points the gun at each of us. “Coke,” I say. “Coke?” Marx says rolling his eyes. “O’doul’s,” Pringle says. “Why don’t you just get water if you don’t want drink,” I
ask him. He shrugs his shoulders and looks around. “I miss the
taste I guess.” My Coke is dark and boring when it arrives. The ice is a
minute away from totally dissolving and the kick of the Coke is already flat. “I told them to put a triple shot,” Marx says and nudges
me with his elbow. I rush the first glass down and notice Pringle is
smelling the rim of his green non-alcoholic O’doul’s bottle. “What’s wrong Pringle,” Marx asks pointing the flare gun
at him. “I miss the smell,” Pringle says quietly. “Glass bottles
have a certain smell when alcohol has been inside, this bottle has it. I just
miss it that’s all.” “I’m getting you another,” Marx says pointing the flare
gun at Pringle’s head. He points the gun in front of him and walks to the bar
as if he is clearing a house in Afghanistan. After two more triple shots of jack, a four horseman, and
a white Russian Marx starts seeing double. At some point I switch from Coke to
water and Pringle switches from O’Doul’s to colorful strawberry drinks that he
says are not that dangerous. Marx is talking about he love the joyous feeling where he
no longer cares that the world is spinning around his head. Pringle eventually
switches from red strawberry drinks with umbrellas to tequila shots and white
Russians. He is soon on the table singing ‘Jumpin Jack’ as the crowd claps
along. Marx puts the flare gun in Pringles hand and goes to the
bar. Pringle is pumping his fist to the beat of the song; he points the flare
gun to the ground and fires off a shot. The flare fires harmlessly to the
ground, bounces up and goes inside the cargo short leg of Marx. Marx screams and falls on the ground smacking himself in
the crotch. He is screaming “Oh my God, Oh my God,” until the entire bar is
surrounded around him screaming to call the ambulance. The bartender dumps a
bucket of ice water on top of him. Flare’s burn magnesium at several thousand
degrees and are designed to burn through water. Marx rolls around on the ground
and begins to seizure from the shock. His mouth drools and his cargo pants are
completely gone when the fire burns out. His skin is completely non-existent
down the thighs and his crotch areas is twisted and smoked with the resemblance
of a meaty pasta dish. The ambulance pulls up and a medical technician jumps
out the back and shakes her head when she see’s Marx. I can tell he is breathing
because his lungs are rising up and down. Marx is
still motionless when the tech lifts the sheet that was placed over his crotch
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