The Saddest Girl

 I hear you

I hear you crying

In the middle of the night

Wishing you were dying

I wish I could do something

I wish I could say something

But how can I

When you do not know my name?

 

You seem to be falling

Out of the tree

Out of the tree of life

Where you once climbed

And played among the branches

Yet  now you are below and broken

Unimportant to those who once called

Called you sweetheart

I wish I could do something

I wish I could say something

But how can I

When you do not know my name?

 

Reviews

[BoSweets]

nice to share your heart. check out my poem titled, " I Heard His Voice"

[Lunar Lightning]

Your message was lacking clarity, and the poem its self was lacking emotion. Though clearly you know what you are talking about, I think you should work a little on this one to make it seem less.... Forced.

Luna