Sweet Girl

Without a clue of the life to be led,

You lay with look of deepest sorrow.

A worried stress reaches it's fingers
Over your young face

 

Please, sweet girl
Realize you've reason not to fear,

Fate holds you close in his fatherly arms.

Your God will keep you moving

In perfect beat.

 

Linger not on thoughts of family's pressures,

They're only impeding your path.

Instead think of your girl,

Your person,

Who's beside you all the way.

Reviews

[Sharon]

Nice! I really liked the last stanza! " Linger not on thoughts of family's pressures, They're only impeding your path. Instead think of your girl, Your person, Who's beside you all the way."Great emotion and thought! I love your writing style too. Nicely done! Keep writing. I will be sure to keep an eye out for more amazing works like this one! :D

[untileternity]

Thank you so much! I was nervous to post my work, but I'll be sure to do it more often. :)

[Sharon]

No problem! You're a great writer! :)

[Edward]

This is a very emotional but well written piece well done! :D

[untileternity]

Thank you very much! That it appreciated :)