DOOM DOOM DOOM DOOM

Titles are overrated.

we reap in silence

grow in hell

we'll surely die

but only time will tell

as life goes on

we fall apart

ripping open

our broken hearts.

I left your side

you ripped my dreams

and tonight it feels like

I'm tearing at my seams

that love was unshakeable

on a foundation of rock

but it unraveled so quick

like an old worn-out sock

We're living in the present

but it's just like the past

only this time,

There's no turning back.

How do we escape?

Where do we go from here?

We're all left wondering

If freedom is anywhere near.

Life is confusing.

Nothing is ever fair.

Everything gets broken,

and it never gets repaired.

People say "love"

But I love hate.

They say look above

but I see a locked gate.

Maybe help will come.

Tomorrow isn't sure.

Life is almost over,

but they still haven't found the cure.

Tears are the proof of life.

This is very true.

It could end so quickly,

but that choice is for you.

Reviews

[GTVile]

The meter was a little quirky, but the feel of it was great. You did a good job of keeping it fast paced and intense, and most of all, I freaking LOVE the title, so great job.