Trust

Drugs and addictions are the things we trust most. People wonder why..

Sometimes things happen,

You can't really control,

But that doesn't give you the right

To just let go.

She picked her head up,

Threw her hands in the air.

She finally made up her mind.

Now she just doesn't care. 

Love is a mystery,

Friend or foe?

It constantly changes,

So you'll never really know.

Love gives us strength

And stands by our side,

But sometimes it hurts,

And causes us to hide.

You can't let life get you down.

So always stay focused,

And keep your eyes off the ground. 

Nothing feels right anymore.

Sometimes I question,

Just what I am living for.

Things seem dark,

Not very alive.

I need someone to help me,

Someone who can revive.

  (bow your head

           and let us pray)

Considerable gifts,

Beautiful people.

They walk hand in hand,

or their way to the steeple.

Sometimes it's frightening to listen to the things they say.

Today is the day

They state their vows.

Give their hearts to another,

But there is one on the prowl.

(They walk down the aisle)

Why do we dwell

On things of the past,

Though we complain

And don't want it to last?

Nothing seems to rid the pain,

But that's what I get for playing the game.

(right?)

Your world is centered around your choices,

but there are so many other tempting voices.. 

Author's Note

I know it's different. Is it good, or should I stick to the books?

Reviews

[writing_for_you]

I think it's pretty good. You know how to write a pretty good poem. On this one there are some typing errors like:

"Love is an mystery"

so i would change "an" to "a".

Altogether though you have some pretty good poems