Writer's lover.

Poetry speaks

First line catch,

that's the biggest challenge.

Through trial and error,

torn and crumpled paper;

A small shine is what we try to find.

We ask as gravediggers,

love makers,

and even world builders;

we ask for different reasons.

Whether the words express our emotions,

explain the love of angels holding demons,

or the sight of changing seasons;

the search is the same for yours and mine.

We may find it in the work of others,

through the pain or joy received from lovers,

or from our bed's side in prayer.

It might take many times

or maybe once for us to find.

It might be tiny and never repeated

or maybe grand and always spoken.

Whatever the case may be,

we ask so much of you.

Still I hope you'll help me.

Just like every other person,

I ask it too.

Catch the readers attention little line.

Please.

Reviews

[Anna]

Great poem! I loved the part that said "Whether the words express our emotions,
explain the love of angels holding demons,
or the sight of changing seasons;
the search is the same for yours and mine." It really spoke to me. Keep up the great work!

[unspokenpain]

Thank you and I will!