The Happiest Day

poetry speaks

I will always remember the day,
when flowers bloomed and a piano played.
The moon was up high and the sun nearby,
and the weather warm when you said hi.

As we stood their for the first time,
In a place that changed our lives;
A piano played.
Drums with a joyous beat,
a couple brass instruments,
and happy voices singing that day.
It was our first meeting,
yet the day I called you wife.

Our love is not normal but special,
so blessed are we as boy and girl.
Words were spoken,
as our lives were chosen,
to be more for the world.

Our voice is powerful, but sounds so sweet.
We are beauty and perfection, perfection that sings.
All this from a pair of hands held together,
in the warmest day of winter,
that made feelings bud like spring.

This is the greatest love story,
of a boy and girl that's yet to be.
One filled with no pain, no worry,
and love that all will want, all will see.

Angels will speak and talk of the one,
who found the perfect love under the winter sun.

Now it may be fiction, but someday will ring true.
The day where the main character "I" finds "you".

I can't wait for the day,

when flowers will bloom as a piano plays.
The moon will be up high and the sun nearby,
and the weather warm on the day you say hi.

Reviews

[Kasutama Sho]

Creative! What a lovely poem. Flowers that won't wither , melody that keeps playing. No pain , only happiness. What a great poem! The line ,"The day where the main character "I" finds "you" is a very meaningful sentence. It indicates hope and happiness. Excellent job! Keep it up!

[unspokenpain]

I'm happy you loved it ^.^

[AliciaB]

This is beautiful! I love all the mentions of flowers, warmth, and music - they create a lovely atmosphere of joy and hope for the piece. The idea of a story in which "the main character "I" finds "you" is also cool. My other favorite lines: "The moon was up high and the sun nearby, / and the weather warm when you said hi" and "Our voice is powerful, but sounds so sweet. / We are beauty and perfection, perfection that sings. / All this from a pair of hands held together, / in the warmest day of winter, / that made feelings bud like spring." Nice twist with explaining the story as both a memory and a hope for the future. Excellent work!

[unspokenpain]

Thank you ^.^. I'm happy you liked it.