My Dream

Just a dream I had

Planes falling from the sky. darkness all around me. every ones eyes are filled with fear. fear, fear is all I see. I hide in a corner and wait for it to pass. but the darkness, just will not leave. can this be really happening, this fear, I just can't believe. I gather everyone, I must protect them. this fear, I won't let it win. men in shadows, come to destroy. But I go right to them, I confront my sin. I open my eyes, it happened again. a terrible dream, that felt oh so real. a message must be trying to be sent. but what is it, was it really a dream?

Reviews

[Nia Lisa]

I really like the transition within the first stanza. By men in shadows, are you saying the men are coming in the form of shadows or out of the shadows?

[unspokenpain]

In my dream if I remember correctly were solidified shadows, like humanity and darkness combined

[Nia Lisa]

Wow, that is neat!

[Kera]

I love this, if this was a dream you had, I get you. I have dreams that feel so real and that have many emotions attatched.

[unspokenpain]

Aren't they the best dreams, when they teach you something.

[Patrick Kimera]

Amazing! Did you actually have that dream?

[unspokenpain]

yes. I wrote this after waking up