Poetry

poetry speaks

When I write I fly on paper, I dance with words. A joy is no longer for one, but a warmth for the world. Pain becomes not only an emotion, but a living being. One we relate to, one that's not hidden but all seeing. I use my blood as my ink, and people's hearts as my paper. I use dreams and reality, my thoughts become a beautiful picture. I carve my own scars, to paper from skin. They always have a beginning, but they never end. So I write not just regular words. Feel my emotions and paint the world. The world I created, the world made with words.

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

"The world I created, the world made with words"- quite interesting and deep. Another line which I liked- "They always have a beginning, but they never end".
Speaking of your work as a whole, the theme and the message pictured is quite nice. Quite a powerful piece of poem. Quite nice, but you can improve. Keep writing.

[unspokenpain]

Thank you. I will continue to sharpen my skills.

[AliciaB]

I love this poem! It is very beautiful, and very relatable to many of us fellow writers. :) I really like the imagery throughout this poem - flying/dancing, painting, dreams and emotions, scars and blood, the creation of a world - all of it is a unique and lovely depiction of your experience as a poet. My favorite lines: "A joy is no longer for one, but a warmth for the world." - Basically, the ultimate purpose of what we do. "I carve my own scars, to paper from skin." - A very unique and intriguing image, and one that expresses very well your ability to create poetry from your experiences and emotions. "The world I created, the world made with words." - This is what I love about writing - the ability to shape with incredible detail places, events, and people that are not actually real, but that become almost like a "second reality" to us and to those who read about them. I highly enjoyed reading this poem. Nicely done!

[unspokenpain]

Thank you. I'm happy you was able to relate!

[Elmarie]

That was just lovely. Written with skill and unique beauty. Thank you for sharing this journey of a writer. Keep it coming :)

Blessings

El

[unspokenpain]

Your welcome. I hope you find future writings just as interesting.