Writer's Block

Writer's Block

A Poem by unspokenpain
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Poetry Speaks

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It's hard to put your feelings in poetry, maybe it will be too overwhelming, or the same as the one before. It's hard to share with strangers, will they feel the passion I'm pouring, or skip along because they're bored. Should I use a personal experience, maybe throw in a quote or two. Should I use a simile to explain, or compare tears on my cheeks with the morning dew. I could copy someone else, maybe steal a compelling line, but could I connect to my readers, when the words aren't even mine. What is my reason for writing? What am I saying with each of these lines? That's where I should start, explain my purpose and the reasons why. Maybe I'll start that another day, to show what truly makes these poems mine.

© 2016 unspokenpain


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Loved it, this is exactly what I am feeling right at this very moment, and the poems you do write while experiancing writers block, typically never feel as though they are any good compared to your other works, at least to me that is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

8 Years Ago

Lol yeah every writer does. But it shall soon pass. I actually wrote a piece I quite enjoyed. Have n.. read more
unspokenpain

8 Years Ago

better post it. Don't deny the world words that can inspire lives and creativity.
Kesha

8 Years Ago

Oh i will. Just needs a few tweaks first :P
I absolutely LOVED this poem! I don't have any constructive criticism, it just rang really true. All of us writers have for sure encountered this problem multiple times!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unspokenpain

8 Years Ago

Right! I wrote this because I was going through writer's block and didn't know what to write, which .. read more
Truth, but not that original...
keep at it- read your book start- there is more originality there...

Posted 8 Years Ago


i guess that`s the job of the writer,to make the reader feel what you feel ..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unspokenpain

8 Years Ago

I wrote this while I was trying to think of what to write... if that train of logic makes sense. :D
 wordman

8 Years Ago

makes sense to me,
lovely ideas ! and make curious of the promise you make:
"Maybe I'll start that another day,
to show what truly makes these poems mine."

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unspokenpain

9 Years Ago

This was written before my poem "Poet's Mind" and that is... if you think of it as a story... the ne.. read more

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Poetry speaks when my words can't. Watch me dance with words. Watch me create a world. I will undress who you are. Realize the masochist inside of you as my dominating words grasp that which lets you .. more..

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A Poem by unspokenpain