Self Doubt

Poetry Speaks

I am your mind, your ideals and goals. My voice is loud, like thunder to your ears. I am your mind, I know what you want to uphold. My voice is loud, my voice is what you will hear. I am your mind, I know what you can do. My voice is loud, So listen to my advice. I am your mind, I tell you what I have to. My voice is loud, I speak only what is right I am your mind, I don’t want you to get hurt. My voice is loud, so let’s stay where it’s safe. I am your mind, listen to my words. My voice is loud, I will have it my way. Because I’m you, I know the right choices, you should be proud. Proud that I’m with you, that my voice is loud. You don’t need a reason other than these, there’s no one who understands you, no one who you will find. I am and will always be there for you, because I am your mind.

Reviews

[Relic]

The mind is why we act the way we do, think the way we do, and ruminate on curious things. It is the difference between fear and bravery, confidence and worry. With enough time, we could probably brainwash ourselves into a newer person. The brain is a powerful voice.

Nicely done.

[unspokenpain]

Thank you. I'm glad everyone is enjoying my writing. Thank you for your words

[npfd]

very interesting, I find like the voice inside our head.

[Lyn Anderson]

Well thought out and concisely logical. One thing, you used capital I throughout except for one place - wondering if that was not intentional.

[unspokenpain]

Thank you I did not see that. will definitely fix.

[A.E Dvir]

The mind is a powerful thing, and the way you repeat certain parts of the poem is really good, makes it sink in. Great poem

[unspokenpain]

Thank you. I'm glad so many people love this poem. Thank you for telling me you enjoyed it!

[Inject Positivity]

Very well thought out work... This reminds a quote of a famous physicist that "there is enough power in power in a human mind that can destroy the New York city"... Mind is the greatest weapon a human being can ever have... Trusting it is the best option to success... I loved the whole thought of the poem.... Clappings....

[unspokenpain]

thank you for the feedback. I wrote this for college and got thumbs up!

[Inject Positivity]

You are welcome, you got abilities to make us think.....

[unspokenpain]

Thank you! I'm glad you think so!

[Robert Parlange]

I liked the repetition in this. It drives home the point. Very good.

[unspokenpain]

Thank you. I'm not a professional writer and my knowledge or poetic structure is only what I see in others. So i'm glad you liked it.

[Robert Parlange]

We are all amateurs here. It's about helping each other.