Outcast

My view on that part of life we have all been through or will go through. my sixth poem.

I am a outcast 

I wonder if they will accept me

I hear their laughter 

I see their fingers pointed at me

I want a sense of belonging 

I am a outcast

 I pretend to be happy 

I feel so down

I touch my face moist from tears 

I worry things will never change

I cry over the pain

I am a outcast 

I understand my place 

I say my place shall never change

I dream one day my place will change

I try to change things

In the end... I am still... 

a outcast...

Reviews

[Persona]

Good subject choice, but a lot of telling. Show a scene where you are treated as an outcast - if people pick you last for sports or exclude you from a conversation. Or walk away when you talk to them.

[Sami Khalil]

Outcasts need a sense of belonging and acceptance in any society...You have penned a good one...:)

[unspoken_hero]

Thank you very much; I really appreciate your review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)