Blissful Blooming

peace stalks this gentle night

Blissful blooms light up the night sky.

 Crimson rose petals engulf the wondrous sight. 

The gentle breeze blows over the silent night,

 bringing acceptance and, joy in its wake.

 Blissful blooms will continue to grow as the world stays in its slumber.

Time slowly passes as the sun raises above the horizon,
spreading the happiness of

 summers delight...

Author's Note

My second poem once again i need feedback thanks.

Reviews

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

I loved it! =D
You painted a beautiful set of images with your words. It reminded me of those pristine moments sitting on the beach, just before the sun pops up over the ocean and washes over the shore. It's that quiet and inifinite time where there is far more meaning in one's thoughts and feelings than in any words that might be whispered as the breeze caresses ones cheek.

Awe-Se-Um!
XO - Kate

[unspoken_hero]

I decided to write about that rare moment when you get that feeling of peace and pure bliss. When your at a place outside just by yourself and the sight is unbelievable. I tried to capture the beauty of all those moments in one poem. I'm glad you liked it, Thanks for the review.

[Persona]

I didn't expect you to be so lyrical with words! I like the picture painted here - I imagine leaves falling across New York's park or something! Very lovely.

[unspoken_hero]

I have another poem if u havnt already checked it out thanks for the reveiw

[Persona]

Oh yes I had a look at it - this one is definitely your best and you should get more people to read it!

[unspoken_hero]

I'm doing my best. I'm new to writing. I wondered if what I wrote was good so I thought why not post it

[Persona]

Yes, that's a good thing to do! You'll get better too. I definitely have. Have you written anything besides poetry? (I like short stories the most). Is anyone reading your writing?

[unspoken_hero]

Only the people that see it on here and yes only poetry

[Persona]

I think it's good that you've made a very definite decision on what genre you like to do! Maybe you could share your poetry with people you know. They'll care more about it than strangers on a writing site

[unspoken_hero]

well its kind of awkward going to your best friend and asking them to read your poem ha so yeah
read morewell its kind of awkward going to your best friend and asking them to read your poem ha so yeah
Then there's those people that think its so weird for a guy to write poetry its seen as girly so i usually don't show my friends or people i know.
On the internet you can stay anonymous on sites like this were everyone is there for the same goal.

[Persona]

I don't think poetry is girlie. If you always write about romance and how beautiful everything is then possibly, but poetry doesn't have to be about emotion. Sometimes it can aggressive or distant, full of judgment or disdain. Which is what I sometimes write. Personally, I get embarrassed showing people I know romance, or stories that I haven't updated because I know how picky I am and you only want to show your best!

[unspoken_hero]

yeah but they don't know that, they don't see past the cover of the book.

[Persona]

You put a cover on your poems? So you print them with cover pages with photos?

[unspoken_hero]

That was an expression dont judge a book by its cover I said they dont see past
the cover of the book as in if you mention poetry ur instantly shunned. Like I said its seen as girlie or for the depressed.