if?

if i told you i loved you would you keep me forever

would you wrap me in your arms and hold me 

Be there for me when i needed you the most 

If i lift would you chase me?

If the sun wouldn't rise would you keep me warm.

Tell me that everything would be ok

take me places and not care what people would say?

If i died would you be there for me still? 

 

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Excellent job here. :) I love it. ^_^ Keep writing!! :D

[unshakenScene]

thanks

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

OMG! Super good, but do proof read. I get what you're trying to say, but the grammar, and the phrases are off, just slightly. Loved the poem though, definitely going into my favorites. :)

[xfallen5oldierx]

Very moving write, speaks worlds to me. Keep Writing!

[Maximillion]

ummmmm wow this is amazing girl keep it up loved it