being alone

it don't rime

being alone is like crying at night

you slowly die inside

there's no way out with out being hurt

you feel the pain 

sometimes you want to die

so you cut yourself and lie

there's no one who cares if you did

so you just cut deeper until you bleed it all out 

 

Author's Note

sorry if its bad

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

It's pretty good I'd say, it's full of emotion and power. :) Not all poetry has to rhyme, I do that all the time. ;) And no, right there was not intentional. XD Great job!! ^_^

[unshakenScene]

thanks agian

[XxYoung.WriterxX]

HELP YOU RHYME:
being alone is like crying at night
feeling pain and show spite
there's no way out with out being hurted
you feel drained and deserted

sometimes you want to die
so you cut yourself and lie
there's no one who cares if you did
you dont know any better, you're just a kid.




lol (:

[unshakenScene]

lol well thanks

[unshakenScene]

well why dont u write some of your own

[XxYoung.WriterxX]

lol idk

[Victoria Elizabeth]

really good job! love it