used

used

A Poem by unshakenScene
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just idk

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Have you ever felt?

Misused

beaten

broken

hurt

just plain sad?

Well for some of us like me this is how

i feel every day

My life is a living hell i cant seem

to find any way out

The more i try the harder i cry for

some one to help me out

But when i call out there is no one

to hear my screams that i cry

Someday im just going to give up on

Trying!

 

© 2013 unshakenScene


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If you ever need me to, I can beat people up. LOL ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

lol:)
The ending really got me, it was so good! No, scratch that, it was uber-spectacular!!! ;) Seriously, this one's really good, and remember that there is always hope, sometimes it's just hiding in a place you didn't expect! ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

thanks:)
really good poem, never give up trying! I hope things get better for u

Posted 12 Years Ago


unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

they have a little
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

I'm glad, stay strong :)
unshakenScene

11 Years Ago

i will
Holy crap, Shelly...this is really good!!! What's wrong?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sami Geiger

12 Years Ago

I hear ya sister amazing work.!
Victoria Elizabeth

12 Years Ago

well life sucks any way
unshakenScene

12 Years Ago

yeah

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Added on October 11, 2012
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