feelings

depression

Have you ever felt so alone like  no one in the world cares if your alive or died?

 Well thats how i feel like if i was just to walk out of this world 

no one would even care because all they care about is there god

damn selfs.

They dont even care to look twice in your dereaction. Every one around

 you just dont care about you or whats wrong?

If you have problems at home or are being made fun of.

Because all your life is drama,and lies and they dont 

want to be apart of it.

But yet they can run there mouth about something

thats not even true about you.

Like calling you a s**t because you sleped with one guy

when they sleeped with 20.

This is because they dont care about my feelings 

just about what there friends think about them.

Reviews

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

It sucks to feel like no one cares, but trust me, someone does. When people make up lies or talk about you, then let them. You only know the truth and the truth you don't have to bother explaining to anyone. They're putting you in the spotlight for awhile as they try to forget their own lives. It's a way of trying to prove themselves I guess...but no one knows you like you do...so whatever they might be saying about you, just let them run their mouths.

[unshakenScene]

i do or i try to

[InsanityWriter]

People only gossip to feel better about themselves and cover up their own fault. They smear up someone's reputation to make theirs look sparklingly clean. That's why you don't be friends with them, and when the opportunity presents itself... Slap 'en hard, right in their lying faces. Great poem. (:

[unshakenScene]

thanks

[Victoria Elizabeth]

This is why, i want you to know how much i love you and how much good I could do for you!!!! I would never let you feel this way and I would take care of you. Those god damn s***s can shut their mouths!!

[Wakeofahero]

Very sad but true, I liked this because it is actually real and most people are liars and cheats. Few grammatical errors but I don't know if you did that for the effect of this writing.

[unshakenScene]

thanks