Kireji

My take on a haiku based on a combination of generally current haiku and a more traditional japanese form of "kiru" thus writing it downward and using fewer words based upon "on" instead of syllables

Odd
onlookers

Kill
vicariously

Watching
T.V.

Author's Note

Tried something different so please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Terohime]

it is different, but in a good way. I can see this style of writing becoming a hit. Good job.
~Your friend Red

[unsavable_soul]

Thanks Res, you are a friend indeed. I hope it does take off, to be honest I find like a haiku fewer words make for a strong message.
Chris

[Terohime]

I agree, sadly i tried that type of writing style and it did not suit me, but you it works for.
read moreI agree, sadly i tried that type of writing style and it did not suit me, but you it works for.
~Res