Dear me

Dear me

A Poem by unsaidwords
"

You can do it!

"
To myself,
Here comes the times when you feel that the world doesn't understand you. 
It's scary and incoherent. The melancholy silence followed after your deep thought 
and realizing that not everything will happen according to your plan. And that's okay. 

You might feel weary many times, but you're still making progress. 
Even if it's your against the world, you don't need to worry. 
You always have yourself. 

© 2024 unsaidwords


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A quick note before I distract myself and completely forget: I think your in the second line is probably meant to be you. At least that's how I read it.

'The melancholy silence followed after your deep thought' is such a good phrase. I also really liked how this was formatted with longer lines. It very much played into the 'letter to myself' idea and worked well in this context. A lot of people would say, at least those I've encountered in my life, that 'you always have yourself' is a sad phrase but I have never seen it that way. You should always be willing to back yourself. To me it's so much more hopeful than sad.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A quick note before I distract myself and completely forget: I think your in the second line is probably meant to be you. At least that's how I read it.

'The melancholy silence followed after your deep thought' is such a good phrase. I also really liked how this was formatted with longer lines. It very much played into the 'letter to myself' idea and worked well in this context. A lot of people would say, at least those I've encountered in my life, that 'you always have yourself' is a sad phrase but I have never seen it that way. You should always be willing to back yourself. To me it's so much more hopeful than sad.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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unsaidwords
unsaidwords

Parañaque City, Metro Manila, Philippines



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