First Love

Through my ups and downs
You were there
You mattered more than my own life
You were my life
But now you are drifting
Away, too far away
And I shed tears of discomfort
When I think of the pain
And how much it hurts when you’re gone

Through my love and my [self] hate
You were there
You helped me live when I no longer wanted to
You were my life
But now you are detaching
From me, too far away
And I weep, paralyzed for hours
When I think of the love
And how great it felt when you were here

Through my sanity and insanity
You were there
You brought my life back to reality
You were my life
But now you are distant
So far away, too far away
And misery consumes me
When I think of the haze
And how much I loved you, but you’ve gone away

But you’ve gone away.
And that’s how we’ll stay.
First love
Still love
Pain, hurt, love
Love

Reviews

[Mistaken]

This piece does not have much flow for me but it portrays alot of hurt...and acceptance at having someone leaving you yet rethinking of your life with them so far...I like it:)