Butterflies

Sweet scented
Drivets
Like iron
Form pools of
Vengeance
Deep in my arm
Deep in my heart
Contract and flutter
Deep in my stomach
The wings create
Pain
Pain of a different nature
The kind that originates
Healthy, beautiful
Which I now have
Constructed from
Beauty to
Hurt
And now it hurts
To love
 

Author's Note

drivets isn't a word. i'm looking for the one i mean. definition: big drops of blood. it's used in macbeth. if you find it before me, tell me please.

Reviews

[Emilee Grimm]

i think the word you are looking for is RIVULETS... not really sure, though!! You might be able to look for the word you want in a thesaurus or something......

Welllll......... I really liked it, like i usually like everything you write!!! ;) I loves you!!!

Por Siempre,
emilee

[lindsay]

this is so creative. i love the ideas =]

[Secondhand Tink]

I really like the contrasts in this since butterflies are normally associated with nice feelings and beauty, your contrasts works really well here, Excellent write! :D

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