Things you have never felt

A Poem by Laura Ex

I feel…
    Powerless
    Weak
    Out of control
Helpless.

I feel…
    Empty
    Weak
    Losing control
Hopeless.

I feel…
    Hurt
    Weak
    With no control
Heartless.

I feel…
    Tense
    Weak
    Under your control
Emotionless.

I feel…
    Used
    Weak
    Too much control
Loveless.

I feel…
    Broken
    Displaced
    Angry
    And weak
Things you have never felt.

© 2009 Laura Ex

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Sami Khalil

A tower of emotions

Posted 12 Years Ago

reminder

The structure really adds to the mood of desperation. I also like the repetition of weak". It reinforces your feelings. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago

OR	Nice piece Peace! Posted 14 Years Ago Nice piece Peace! Rating /100

Brittany W

I agree this is relateable, but you wrote it well, that each time she feels more pain and helpless, great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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wow, i can relate ..this is a great write

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on April 28, 2009

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Laura Ex

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i'm a girl. my boyfriend is the sweetest thing ever. i've been the the brink and back multiple times. talk to me, i'm pretty open. life is complicated, but beautiful. but most of the time i fe.. more..