I Never Meant to be Alive

I Never Meant to be Alive

A Poem by Laura Ex

Even erasers do not erase completely

Even love and heart do not complete me

So work for what you will give up

And throw it all away

Do you tell me it's inhuman

To actually feel this way

To not care if you live or die

To not care if i live or die

To be numb, cold, a monster

I fear your judgement

And hate myself harshest of all

I could never hurt you with truth of me

Love about as you do

I'm sorry if i hurt you

I never meant to

© 2009 Laura Ex


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It is deep, but not so deep as to muddle your message.

You fear judgement?

To whom is the writing addressed?

I have an idea.

markymark

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very deep and well written :]

Great job

Posted 15 Years Ago


I think it's good. You declare what you mean so the meaning is so clear. Good job. Please keep up with the writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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