Peaceful Darkness

Peaceful Darkness

A Poem by theunknownsophist
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In cold darkness, I feel at peace. My face is cold. M y heart is cold. My eyes are cold. My arms and legs are cold. I have no feelings nor can I show any emotions. In cold darkness, I feel at p

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In cold darkness, I feel at peace.

My face is cold.

M y heart is cold. 

My eyes are cold.

My arms and legs are cold.

I have no feelings nor can I show any emotions.

 In cold darkness, I feel at peace.

© 2013 theunknownsophist


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TLK
Typo in line 3.

This poem doesn't deliver much of a scene. It is pretty much a poem about nothing -- and therefore I can't help but think it is about the non-experience of death.

As Epicurus said, "Death does not concern us, because as long as we exist, death is not here. And when it does come, we no longer exist."

Posted 11 Years Ago


In cold darkness, I feel at peace.

My face is cold.

My heart is cold.

My eyes are cold.

My arms and legs are cold.

I have no feelings nor can I show any emotions.

In cold darkness, I feel at peace.


Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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